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Author Topic: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!  (Read 3409 times)

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Offline Walter B

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The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« on: February 25, 2016, 09:28:51 AM »
WELCOME TO THE MANGARAIDERS  FREE FOR ALL BATTLE ARENA

This is a workshop to practice our character design and fight scene writing skills.

How it works:

Everyone can enter their character along with powers, abilities and any special moves it may use in battle. Please also add a short description I can use as headline.

You can have your character challenge any other character you want. Write a battle scene between the two character and post it here for us to see. Members can then leave feedback, make suggestions on how to make the fights more interesting, etc.

You can also take two characters and have them fight even if none of them belong to you.

We can also make group battles, several characters going against one powerful character, etc. Anything you can imagine.



Right now I am looking for an artist to donate one illustration we can use for the arena. Will post more details later.

Characters:

Tristan: A devil with a nice suit

Kata: Shadows of the Kitsune and Nogitsune

Dakota: A teenager with no purpose in life but to destroy her enemies.

Noah

Kalvin: The earth manipulation Artifact user

Ryoni: Demon Hunter

Bito
« Last Edit: March 16, 2016, 08:53:01 AM by Walter B »

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2016, 09:33:47 AM »
Tristan: A devil with a nice suit.


Description: His name is Tristan. He is a devil who likes to wear nice suits.

Powers/abilities: His main weapon is his pointed tail, which is very hard and fast. He can use it to pierce through people's hearts and quickly swing it to cut off their heads.

Concept Art:

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Moves:

He has a special suit which is bulletproof, highly resistant to elements and looks very nice on him.

He can use his tail in many ways to attack his opponents. Slashing, piercing, grabbing enemies, grabbing objects to throw at them, etc.

Tail Jump: Uses his tail against the ground to propel himself and jump very high.

Special move: Tail spear. By taking his tail and coiling it around his arm he can use it as some kind of armored spear in battle.

Secret move: Surprise tail elongation. By restructuring the molecules in his tail, he can make it longer and thinner than normal. The tail loses most of its strength however so he doesn't do that often. Usually as a way to surprise an enemy who is trying to stay out of the tail's reach.

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2016, 09:46:00 AM »
Starting to become the MR Character Fighting Arena Guru, huh? I like it! x3

If this is okay; going to throw another character of mine into the mix. ^w^

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Kata


K'


Height: Both are 5'6

Personality: When Kata is present, Kata is respectful to those kind to him and innocent. Always trying not to be a burden to anyone, Kata lends his skills to those who need it and to protect the peace. Somewhat silly and silent at times, when faced with a enemy, Kata usually has little to say; sticking to 'taking care of the problem' than wasting time. When K' is present, his person takes a more cold and serious status. While still very kind to those around him, K' shows little emotion; often confusing people. When angered however, K' fully expresses his rage with growls and a slight change in appearance.

Physical description: Kata has shoulder-length white flowly hair with bangs that cover his blue eyes (which turn red when either K' is trying to take control). Always wears a red mask to hide the lower part of his face. His attire various, but usually in combat, Kata wears a typical shinobi outfit (given it is colored white) sometimes choosing to fight shirtless. Upon Kata removing his mask, K' takes reign over the body, completely changing Kata's appearance. Kata's white fur changes to two shades of dark grey and his hair shapes into a dark grey ponytail with red highlights. Two horns sprout before K's ears and his attire changes to more weapons littering baggy pants. K's key feature are a pair of cuffs that hold two long chains the seem to move by his or their own will. Length varies.

Abilities (Abilities are not powers-- an ability is having superhuman strength, speed, sight, etc.): Kata is trained heavily in the way of the shinobi; utilizing speed, agility, and stealth to a master degree. Able to handle most ninja weaponry with ease. When K' takes hold, K' scarifies Kata's skills for strength, durability, and magic. Able to take much punishment, K is a resilient individual. His demon body allows for abnormal regeneration of normal damage. His demon body grants him super strength as well.

Powers (Simple, do they control ice, fire, or something like that): Able to utilize various ninja weaponry, Kata's power revolves around quick and close quarters combat, lacking in magic abilities. While Kata knows little in magic K uses arcane power, wielding the pair of chains around his wrist as extensions of his body with ease , among other magic abilities.

Weakness: Kata's main weakness is power. While being quick and sneaky, Kata is only as good as the weapons he has. Kata also suffers from passing out if reverted back from K' after K' has suffered major damage. K's main weakness is holy magic and items in general. Even standing too close to a church causes K' to slowly roast; let alone, burst into flames if comes into contact. Tags placed upon K's form causes him to lose his abilities until removed. Both sharing the same body, K' and Kata constantly bicker over who 'takes hold', often leading to them getting distracted at times.

Combat Type: Kata is a cool and calculating combatant; looking for weak points and ways to exploit them. Kata is not afraid of ending a life without them ever knowing what ended it. K' sticks to letting his chains take care of weak opponents but will revent to magic and hand-to-hand if they overcome it. Only when angred does K' turn into barraging the opponent with attacks.

Equipment: Kata comes to battle with a ninjaken short sword, 7 shurikens, 3 smokebombs and a kasurigama while K' only equipment are his chains upon his wrist.

Moves:

(M-1) (Kata) Slithering Winds: Kata begins to run that shifts his body to resemble 'white' currents of wind; hiding his actual body with it.

(M-2) (Kata) Shifting Shadow: Kata can preform quick teleports within shadows; allowing for speedy travel. Kata can also use this to help others travel as well.

(M-3) (Kata) Feign Death: 'This oldest ninja trick in the book'. Simply put, Kata 'pretends' to take lethal damage, only to reappear a moment later. A energy-draining move that Kata can only do twice a day.

(M-4) (Kata) Spectrum of Light: Placing a hand upon various textures, Kata can shift his body to resemble to look and feel of that texture.

(M-5) (K') Reaper Chains: K's chains attack and defend on their own without K's input (unless K' chooses to). Able to grab, strangle, hold, rappel, among many other feats. K' can also use the chains by links for even more various feats.

(M-6) (K') Arcane Ball: K' forms a ball of arcane energy that he can either fire or hold to 'play' with. At will he can detonate it like a bomb or dissipate it with no ill effects.

(M-7) (K') Telepathy: If near K' or in contact with a chain link, K may speak with said person through his mind.

(M-8) (K') Demon Flames: K' can superheat his chain links to the point of flames to roast/burn his target. Can only use when the links are connected.

(SM-1) (Kata) Pressure Point: Kata strikes at various points upon his opponent body with the tips of his claws. Attempts to lock up limbs of his foe to deliver the final blow easier.

(SM-2) (K') 'Nogitsune': K' takes a moment to summon a blade which absorbs the blood of living targets and heals him in the majority of the wound.

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2016, 09:51:18 AM »
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Kata

K'


Kata

Tristan

Noah

« Last Edit: February 25, 2016, 06:16:21 PM by Walter B »

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #4 on: February 25, 2016, 10:00:38 AM »
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Starting to become the MR Character Fighting Arena Guru, huh? I like it!

I wish  ;) If only I could write fight scene like Sherbert.

You always have such nice images. You did them yourself? That ninja is so cool! Can't wait to see him in combat! Do you have a short description I can use as headline for the OP? So people can get a quick overview of the characters without having to click all those links.

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2016, 10:06:59 AM »
Naw! I paid for them by a artist from a different site. Captured their image perfectly, wouldn't you agree?

Let's see... a headline. How about 'Shadows of the Kitsune and Nogitsune'. (Cheesy enough?) ^^; 

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #6 on: February 25, 2016, 10:21:32 AM »
Yep, the chains and those ninja tools look really cool

I guess the same artist made Xiana?

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #7 on: February 25, 2016, 10:23:15 AM »
Yep, the chains and those ninja tools look really cool

I guess the same artist made Xiana?

Yep. Overall I'm happy with it. Need to get more art done by her. ~w~

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #8 on: February 25, 2016, 11:48:13 AM »
Here's my character!

Dakota
A teenager with no purpose in life but to destroy her enemies.

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Name: Dakota “Blaze” Blakes
Background: Her family was lost to the apocalypse, leaving her to either wither away or survive.
Personality: Kind. Tries her best to be optimistic, but I mean, she might be the last person on earth and that sucks. Resourceful. When battling, her heart becomes merciless and she is determined to kill. Dry humor.

Appearance:
Body Type: Somewhat petite, but this helps her evade in battle. Fast. She has freckles!
Eyes: Her left eye has been permanently damaged from a blow to the head, so it’s hazel and blue. Her right eye is a light brown.
Hair: Long, a light orange color, it falls to about her shoulder blades. Wavy, no bangs.
Clothes: Black tank, ripped skinny jeans and a leather satchel, packed with stuff

Abilities/Powers: She knows judo and makes powerful force fields that last for a few minutes before she tires.
Primary Weapon: First she uses her battle ax, then her katana.
Side Weapons: Two maces and her father’s old pistol (only 16 bullets, the rest was lost.)
Abilities:
- To duck or evade some moves (She can dodge about 3/5 of them I bet)
- She has grenades and some poison stored in vials in her bag, but very limited
- She can shock others, considering she has powers over electrical forces

Her special move: she can shock her battle ax, so it becomes more powerful.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2016, 11:55:09 AM by What About Christmas? »

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« Reply #9 on: February 25, 2016, 02:43:59 PM »
Hey Walter can you just get Ryoni's information from the tournament and add him to the list of characters please?
Also I like the idea of a terrain changing arena. It makes things different and interesting as well as helping turn the tide of battle quickly.

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« Reply #10 on: February 25, 2016, 05:59:38 PM »
Name: Noah
Background: Noah works as a hired assassin or mercenary or any job that pays decently, and spends the money he makes on orphans that live with him. It be nice to say that Noah is just the strong silent type but that would be a grave understatement. He is a gentle giant, who does many funny and crazy things for the kids that live under his roof. While he doesn't talk that doesn't stop him from getting out and cutting lose. He love cooking and eating, playing games, watching movies, cartoons, animes. At times it's like he's just a big kid himself.
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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #11 on: February 25, 2016, 06:15:13 PM »
Hey Walter can you just get Ryoni's information from the tournament and add him to the list of characters please?
Also I like the idea of a terrain changing arena. It makes things different and interesting as well as helping turn the tide of battle quickly.

Could you copy and past it here please as you see I am adding just the links in the OP instead of the info and if I link to the other thread it may confuse people.

You can copy the teddy vs Ryoni mathc if you want and we will have our first fight  ;D


Thank Blaze I added the pic to the gallery. If you want add a short description like the others.
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« Reply #12 on: February 25, 2016, 07:37:17 PM »
thanks and sure ^_^

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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #13 on: February 25, 2016, 10:33:54 PM »
i see this concept has finally taken flight.

i noticed this earlier but i didn't have time to submit a character. basically the same character i used in the tournament but with a few modifications on his info. i really don't have any better characters to submit for the time being, but is there a limit to how many characters we can add? also whether they could be good or bad characters? i might have some others if necessary.

Kalvin: The earth manipulation Artifact user

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origins: Artifact

age: mid-twenties?

eyes: grey

hair: black

appearance: black T-shirt and jeans (working on details for appearance)

personality: stubborn, fierce, determined, doesn't give up easily, and never refuses a challenge in a fight  8)

other character traits: may look cocky at times but becomes deadly and serious when in a tough fight. never shows off his true power right away, keeps the opponent second guessing. often aims on fighting the opponent within close combat.

abilities/powers:
uses a silver gauntlet (just on the arm, not the hand) that grants him the abilities to manipulate earth and rock, commonly referred to as an Artifact. by breaking and collecting earth around him, he could use it by recreating it to create objects, weapons, barriers, and even armor when necessary.

he also carries an additional Artifact in his pocket that is kept hidden in a small cloth but is only used on rare occasions; referred to as the Rage Artifact. its an necklace with a charm that gives out a vibrant aura around it and its user, it feeds off nearby anger; the more anger it stores, the stronger its user becomes.

combos:

common combos:
- creates rock blades on his arms, sometimes spears but their not as sharp as the blades.
- creates blunt chunks of rock on his arm; solely used for hand-to-hand combat.
- creates walls or barriers by recreating the rock or by simply stomping his foot on the ground to have it rise from the ground up.
- levitate and hurtle rocks at the opponent like gunfire if he doesn't consider the battle worth fighting; less larger rocks or several smaller rocks, depends on the situation.

rare combos:
- by stomping his foot on the ground, he could have a section of earth travel beneath the floor and launch directly below the enemy as if it was a pillar rising from the ground; often sends enemies flying when enough force is applied.
- mainly used if it requires heavy resistance, he gathers the earth and rock to create a thin suit of rock which covers his body as much as possible. he often combos this ability with rock blades as he intends to strike directly, sometimes rock fists. it wont be as strong as the barriers but it helps him fight difficult situations up-close without taking any direct damages. sometimes he creates the armor by charging through a rock wall or when underneath the ground.

super rare combos:
- by placing his hands on the ground, and if he were to really concentrate, he could create a powerful earthquake; could also work with additional combos, like launching an earth attack from the ground or rock spikes. the more he concentrates, the more stronger the shockwaves will become.
- in desperate times, he could bury himself within the earth and travel underneath the ground; weather for a sneak attack or to avoid the fight until regaining enough energy (this was planned to be used in one occasion of my project, otherwise he never does this).

secret combos (by meeting certain conditions and summoning a lot of strength, he could use these combos but will use up a lot of energy):
- by concentrating greatly and by doing so may leave him vulnerable (which is why he normally doesn't use it), he could break apart the rock chunks into smaller chunks until it becomes grains of sand; by doing so, he could manipulate sand. although, it wont be as strong of an attack as the rock and requires him to concentrate on each grain of sand, he could still use it for sneak attacks within certain situations that required it.
- the Hail Mary of all combos, when desperate times call for it; this requires the Rage Artifact: instead of collecting the earth on himself, he could concentrate it within thin air and molt 2 separate pieces of collected rock into giant floating rock hands. he could levitate these hands as perform powerful punches and attacks.

forbidden combo:
- simply put: this has never been used (not even within my own project! and if it was it wouldn't be until near the end); it requires the Rage Artifact at its maximum power and a lot of energy: when it comes for such a power to be used, he eyes will glow bright (to match the color of the gem on the artifact but idk which color yet; lets say red for now) and he will use the very last of his energy to collect all of the rock and earth his abilities could reach. by doing so, he uses it to create a rock armored suit, but not just any armor ... a much larger shell. depending on how much he collects, he will use it all to cover him as a colossal size rock suit of armor. this one hit kill will surely finish the job of any fight, although this has and may never will be used ... so pray it doesn't come to it.   :devil:

team-work combos (if it ever happens):
- could create all sorts weapons made from rock and give them to a fellow ally to use, it may break if he doesn't concentrate on it too much.
- could break the ground around the ally and use the earth as a platform that could levitate them, by doing so keeps him from fighting since it requires much focus to move it.
- could redirect the rock and assemble it onto an ally instead of himself; blades, armor, etc.

weaknesses:
even though a lot of his abilities require a lot of energy if used too much, to summarize it best: if there's no earth or if his Artifact is removed ... he's screwed.  :sadbye:


looking forward to kick some ass  :ninja:
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Re: The MangaRaiders Battle Arena. Enter your character!!
« Reply #14 on: February 25, 2016, 11:14:58 PM »
Cool, is that rage artifact a new thing? Didn't remember it.

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but is there a limit to how many characters we can add?

That is a good question. Would be interesting to ask other people about it. On one hand it would be cool to be able to show off different characters, like the antagonist or an important side character. On the other hand this could get crazy quickly, and we may end up having a huge list of characters and no fights.

Maybe a solution would be to allow somebody to enter an additional character only after they have contributed two fights with their first character. So people can't just dump a bunch of characters. Those who contribute to the workshop by writing a couple of fights could then enter additional characters, and so on.

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