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Author Topic: Keri's Storytime  (Read 965 times)

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Offline IamKeria

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Keri's Storytime
« on: May 21, 2015, 09:16:03 PM »
Hello All. These are projects that I am working on and links to projects that I am working on. If you would like for me to review your stories please leave a message in my inbox with a link to the story or you can just post it here and I will give my feed back. I would also like feedback on my stories as well in the link of the stories. I hope you enjoy my works.

White: Developing plot/ Not Yet started
Lime Green: Some chapters written but subjected to change at anytime
Teal: Finish Writing
Red: Manga with at least 1 chapter drawn


My Manga

Title: Fulfilling A Promise
Genre: Adventure, Tragedy, War, Fantasy, Drama
Description:
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"Look for the five with the Barooch Avah marks to fulfill the promise". "Who's voice is that? Yiskah, a young girl who hears a voice that seems that she can only hear. It tells here to fulfill the promise. But what is this promise? What can she do? And who are the five with the Barooch Avah marks?
Last update: 1/25/2016
Link: Fulfilling A Promise

Title: A Humble's Man Pain
Genre: Genre: Tragedy, War, Adventure
Description:
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A man by the name of Bonjan Kè lost everything he ever loved. His wife and son were killed in a war between neighboring kingdoms. His herbal business was burn down through the crisis. His mother and sister was tortured and beheaded in front of his eyes. His only daughter who was a year old at the time was taken in the midst of the crisis from him. When the enemy was about to kill him someone stop him and told him to capture him as a slave instead. Traveling the land bare feet with his captive, he never once cried, he never once showed a face of fear like the others around him, and he never once gave up on one day reuniting with his little girl. His captive hated this about him and tried to break him through near death beatings, drownings, and starvation. But he wouldn't budge. And through it all he spoke to them with kindness and respect. After 3 years of being tortured and worked to the bones, he was about to be hung, the King notice the fearlessness in the man eyes as he was being roped around the neck. Just as they kicked the horse from under him, the branch of the tree snapped and Bonjan Ké landed on his feet on the ground still with no fear, no quivering, no emotions. He showed the essence of strength. The King admired this. He order him to be let go and brought to the palace. As he was entering the palace he notice a little girl around 4 years old that look like his daughter playing with another little girl in the palace. The King offered him a job in the army. But he refused. The King was angry at this refusal, but the Lady of the land offered him a job to protect their youngest child. He refused. He wanted to search for his own daughter. The King made an offer. That he would offer to help find his daughter in order to protect his. He refused. At that moment the king palace was raided by revolutionary army. They were killing everyone. Bonjan Ké seen the little 4 year old about to die at the hands of one of the men but something inside of him said Save her. He rushed over and quickly grabbed her. And some how made it out of the palace. Now on a journey with a 4 year old to find his own daughter he travel from land to land searching for clues of her whereabouts while avoiding the Revolutionary Army and the King Army.
Last update: 8/1/2015
Link: A Humble's Man Pain


Title: In Search of We
Genre:  Slice of Life, Shounen, Romance
Description
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Twin boys separated at birth were brought up in two different house hold. Ochichiri N'abali was brought up in a very rich family. He is well rounded, handsome, and smart. However, he is selfish, cunning, conniving, and greedy. He is a two faced individual who puts on the good guy act to get what he wants at times. Ihe Ututu was brought up in the slums by an elderly couple. He have had it tough through out life. But some how, he turn out to be a very humble, respectable, caring, and considerate young man. Also, smart, handsome, and well rounded. He always smiling and always cheerful. One day a girl by the name of Agbu Onu was being harassed by a group of guys. Both the boys came to her rescue. Through the fighting with the other guys both the boys Ochichiri who had dreads that he wore in his face and Ihe who had braids, hair was gratified with shards of glass and adhesive glue spray. Agbu thank them both and the three of them went their separate ways. By chance, the three of them ended up at the same school. Due to the glue and glass that got in the boys hair, they had it cut. They seem to have missed each other through the school. However, they notice Agbu. When they walked up to her simultaneously to say Hey Agbu it's me Ochichiri or Ihe, They noticed each other for the first time. They had each other face. Shocked the boys confronted their parents and grandparents about the situation and found out the truth that they are both adopted. Now the boys are both getting to know each other for the first in 16 years all while trying to search to find out who they real parents are and fighting for the love of Agbu
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Title: Black Wall Street
Genre: Historical, Tragic, Fiction
Description: Two young boys caught in between a race riot trying to save their city

Title: Who am I
Genre:psychological, history, mystery, drama, fiction, personal, fantasy
Description: A young girl who grew up in a rural area who is decendant of former slaves now trying to find out what her ancestral life was like before they were taken captive.

Title: Middle Passage (Archive Series)
Genre: Drama, Tragedy, Romance, History
Description:
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A. A man who is separated from his wife and kids story of how the middle passage was and what happen durning his time there.
B. A young girl is capture describe her journey to the port to the middle passage (can be a two part story) 
C. Twin sisters who are seperated and can feel each others pains from seperate journeys to the new world
D. A boy and girl who was going to be married found themselves being treated like animals thrown into chains of yoke nd marked through the desert to be sold off.
E. A chef of a village who sells off all his people for gold and gains soon find himself being in the chains.

Title: Sapphire Bell
Genre: War, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance
Description: Centers around two people a woman and a man who overcomes trust issues and start to trust in each other in order to save the kingdom from a wicked ruler who plotted to kill and steal their Sapphire Bell.

Completed Works

Title: GAINS!!!: Leg Day
Genre: sports, comedy, slice of life
Description: A short story base on a day to day life of a fitness freak name Donte who deals with everyday problems in the gym.
Last Update: 5/26/2015
Link: GAINS!!!: Leg Day

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2015, 10:35:52 AM »
Would you be able to turn that into a spoiler or change the blue? I'm having a really hard time reading it

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2015, 10:43:37 AM »
Sure thing I'll do that. Thanks.

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2015, 01:09:45 PM »
The third story piqued my interest. I'm allways into tragedy and relentlesness so if you ever get at it let me know and I'd be happy to read about it.
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« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2015, 02:14:27 PM »
The third story piqued my interest. I'm allways into tragedy and relentlesness so if you ever get at it let me know and I'd be happy to read about it.

Okay no problem. I'll let you know when I start on it.

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2015, 09:28:12 PM »
A couple of these seem a little too mature for me haha. So, after reading these, I can't comment very much. Ideas are usually really good - the hard part is executing them. I'd like to see what you come up with :D

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« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2015, 09:44:28 PM »
A couple of these seem a little too mature for me haha. So, after reading these, I can't comment very much. Ideas are usually really good - the hard part is executing them. I'd like to see what you come up with :D

Thank you CptCog. I already have Chapter 1 and 2 for "The Promise of Affliction" right now. If it isn't too mature for you check that out if you like.

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2015, 11:29:27 PM »
I like the third story idea too. Also the title of the fourth story is awesome. All the gym bros be tryna to get them gains.
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« Reply #8 on: May 26, 2015, 11:56:11 PM »
I like the third story idea too. Also the title of the fourth story is awesome. All the gym bros be tryna to get them gains.

Yeah I just finished the short story to it. Basically I'm trying to make that in a straight forward manga. Going to storyboard it right now and look for me a manga artist to do the actual drawing. I am not so great with inking details. Nor good anatomy to try and attempt the manga process on my own lol.  I might want to run the story by you guys first though. I tried to make it funny but idk if it's just like Funny lol in your head or Funny hahahaha out loud. I want it to be Funny hahaha out loud. Plus it has a few references.

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Re: Keri's Storytime
« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2015, 03:29:05 AM »
I really liked the Affliction one. Just one thing confused me.

Goyims? As in, the Hebrew word for someone who isn't Jewish?

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« Reply #10 on: May 27, 2015, 01:53:30 PM »
I really liked the Affliction one. Just one thing confused me.

Goyims? As in, the Hebrew word for someone who isn't Jewish?

Yes it's called Gentiles in english. Goy is actually the root word or Goyim. However, I am using Goyim as a root word itself instead of a plural in the story by adding the 's.

PS: Jew-ish people aren't really "Jews" themselves. Well not the rich ones who rule most of the whole world. [I feel a story idea coming on from that lol].